Hi, just read your script. It’s certainly well written and thought out. One thing I will say however is that I get given out to all the time for my scripts having too much dialog. Yours reads more like a stage play rather than a screen play. I’m not saying that’s bad I’m just pointing it out because a lot of other people might say the same thing. In my opinion there is an over emphasis on using images to tell a story through the medium of the screen. I think Reservoir Dogs is a good example of bucking the trend but that came out a long time ago now and few films have followed its lead. Still for what its worth I’d like to see your piece when its finished. As for crew I’m afraid I’m just a writer and you seem to have that ground well covered all ready.
Good luck
Aaron
